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pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/platforms.xml: 1.9 -> 1.10



以下のページの更新をしました。ツッコミをお願いします。

pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/platforms.xml: 1.9 -> 1.10

> revision 1.10
> date: 2005/05/15 20:33:01;  author: rillig;  state: Exp;  lines: +6 -6
> Fixed some typos.

金曜日までに異議がなければ、 commit します。

以下、訳と原文それぞれの新旧の差分です。

--- platforms.xml.orig	2006-09-14 23:08:15.000000000 +0900
+++ platforms.xml	2006-09-14 23:08:15.000000000 +0900
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.9 2005/05/14 22:34:59 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.10 2005/05/15 20:33:01 rillig Exp $ -->
 <!-- Based on english version: -->
-<!-- NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.9 2005/05/14 22:34:59 rillig Exp   -->
+<!-- NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.10 2005/05/15 20:33:01 rillig Exp   -->
 
 <chapter id="platforms">
   <title>&os; 以外のシステムで pkgsrc を使う</title>
@@ -312,7 +312,7 @@
 	このバージョンの IRIX で &man.if.indextoname.3;, &man.if.nametoindex.3;
 	などへの対応がおこなわれたからです。</para>
 
-      <para>現在のところ、pkgsrc は一つの ABI にしか対応しません。つまり、
+      <para>現在のところ、pkgsrc は同時には一つの ABI にしか対応しません。つまり、
 	古い 32 ビット ABI、新しい 32 ビット ABI、64 ビット ABI を切り替えることはできません。
 	最初に "abi=n32" を使って始めた場合は、
 	すべてのパッケージがこれを使って構築されることになります。</para>
Index: platforms.xml
===================================================================
RCS file: /cvsroot/pkgsrc/doc/guide/files/platforms.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.9
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
--- platforms.xml	14 May 2005 22:34:59 -0000	1.9
+++ platforms.xml	15 May 2005 20:33:01 -0000	1.10
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.9 2005/05/14 22:34:59 rillig Exp $ -->
+<!-- $NetBSD: platforms.xml,v 1.10 2005/05/15 20:33:01 rillig Exp $ -->
 
 <chapter id="platforms">
   <title>Using pkgsrc on systems other than &os;</title>
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <sect1>
     <title>Bootstrapping pkgsrc</title>
 
-    <para>For Operating Systems other than &os;, we provide a bootstrap kit to
+    <para>For operating systems other than &os;, we provide a bootstrap kit to
       build the required tools to use pkgsrc on your platform. Besides
       support for native &os;, pkgsrc and the bootstrap kit have support for
       the following operating systems:</para>
@@ -65,9 +65,9 @@
       <filename>/usr/pkg</filename> for the
       <emphasis>prefix</emphasis> where programs will be installed in,
       and <filename>/var/db/pkg</filename> for the package database
-      directory where pkgsrc will do it's internal bookkeeping.
+      directory where pkgsrc will do its internal bookkeeping.
       However, these can also be set using command-line
-      parameters.</para>
+      arguments.</para>
 
     <para>Binary packages for the pkgsrc tools and an initial set of packages is
       available for supported platforms. An up-to-date list of these can be
@@ -308,7 +308,7 @@
 	version of IRIX providing support for &man.if.indextoname.3;, &man.if.nametoindex.3;,
 	etc.</para>
 
-      <para>At this point in time, pkgsrc only supports one ABI.  That is, you can not
+      <para>At this point in time, pkgsrc only supports one ABI at a time.  That is, you can not
 	switch between the old 32-bit ABI, the new 32-bit ABI and the 64-bit ABI.  If
 	you start out using "abi=n32", that's what all your packages will be built
 	with.</para>
@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@
       <para>The bootstrapping process should set all the right options for programs such
 	as imake(1), but you may want to set some options depending on your local
 	setup.  Please see <filename>pkgsrc/mk/defaults/mk.conf</filename> and, of
-	course, your compilers man pages for details.</para>
+	course, your compiler's man pages for details.</para>
 
       <para>If you are using SGI's MIPSPro compiler, please set
          <programlisting>PKGSRC_COMPILER=mipspro</programlisting>